The Sensational holidays by Susan

On Tuesday my friends and I all went to Mcdoanlds. We were so hungry. We ate alot of food. Then this boy was really annoying.We got so angry at him that I told my dad and he growled at him.He ran away.Later we went into the car. We were so excited and happy because we were going to Rainbowsend. I had alot of fun. Our first ride was the pirate ship we went on that ride 7 times. It was so cool. Later we went and ate.It was so cool I ate 5 chips and was full later. Wee went to the movies. We ate 3 large popcorns and 3 fantas we watched G_force .It was so tender and compassionate. When we finished the movie we were chalky and tired. Later we dropped my friends. Then me and my dad went home. We were just in time to hear about that my dad's dad was in hospital because he fainted. We were so distressed and dejected. My dad ran into the room and wept I felt him so crushed I went into the room and hugged him and we started weeping .Then we enjoyed the rest of the night.