Wednesday, September 23, 2009

By Jacob The missing keys

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Jacob
Narrative
On a sunny day two boys went to the shops, to buy some equipment for their base, they made it for their friends. They made it a long time ago, it was getting worn out by the weather, but it still looked amazing, and it was!. The next day I went to school it was my day for news. I brought the keys from the base. I talked to the class after when I reached into my pocket to get the keys they were gone it was empty. The boys wound not be happy with me. How could I explain that I had lost them. I ran home and watched T.V in a very bad mood, I went to bed. In the morning I still felt very bad, I miss a day off school. I looked everywhere for the keys but I couldn’t find them anywhere, I decided to go back to school to search for the keys. I will check with my teacher to see if anyone has found them, at school I didn't eat my lunch because I was to upset to eat. We had assembly the teacher had some items in lost property that children had lost. I was exceptionally excited to think my keys would be in the bag however it was Tims bag, I mean Tims bag was important but not as important as the base keys. When I arrived home and decided to retrace my steps starting with walking to school. As I recapped I discovered that instead of placing the keys in my pocket I had put them in my school bag and to my astonishment, I found the keys in my lunch box. If only I had not been so upset yesterday I would have found them then.

2 comments:

Charlene Carroll said...

Hi Jacob
I loved your Lost Keys story. Sometimes I misplace my keys and have to retrace my steps too.

Anonymous said...

WOW long and great