Sunday, August 9, 2009

My keeping our self safe story By Izabella

One wonderful day a girl called Kirsten went to her friend Krystal's house. Kirsten asked Krystal if they should go to the mall. Krystal said'' sure but I have to asked my dad first ''. So they asked Krystal's dad if they could go to the mall.. He said'' Yes ''. So they went off and walked down the street to get to the mall. Then two strange kidnappers who got out of jail were following them. Then Kirsten and Krystal started running but the two strangers who got out of jail kept following them. Then when they got to the mall Kirsten and Krystal went into a shop called John's grocery store and asked the shopkeeper [Jonh] if they could hide. John asked what's happening? Krystal and Kirsten explained that they were getting chased by 2 strange kidnappers who got out of jail. So John called the police. When the police got to the mall they saw the 2 strange kidnappers and aressted them again. A constable called Paul took the girls home and the girls was safe.

1 comment:

Mary Karena (Rawiris' mum) said...

I LOVE THIS STORY iZABELLA. ITS FANTASTIC TO KNOW YOU HAVE LISTENED VERY CAREFULLY TO WHAT YOUR TEACHER/PARENTS HAVE TAUGHT YOU FOR KEEPING YOURSELF SAFE. I WOULD LIKE TO MARK THIS IF I MAY? SCORE=100%. AND FOR YOUR TEACHER?
SCORE=110%.