Thursday, August 13, 2009
Kidnapped By Limal
On Saturday a boy who had spicky red hair, red eyes, tall, thin and strong went to a camping area.The camping area had lots a lot tents, playgrouds, a riverto swim in, shops, heaps of people and a hotel.It was a huge place.First his parents sorted out the big tent whichhad 3 bedrooms.The boy went to the colourful playground while his parents were setting up the tent.But his parents said to be back by half n hour.The boy said "okay" and rushed down to the playground.It was a huge playground.First he went on the slide then he went on the swing.He was tired for a while.Then he stood up and went on play swing again.He was like a playing machine.He only had five minutes left to keep on playing.But he thought that he could play for more than five minutes.Suddenly two kiddnappers rushed through a bush and grabbed the boy.The kiddnappers had black masks on their faces.They rushed to their car and drove away.The boy's parents were really worried so they went to the police statioa and spoke to an officer.When the boy was in the car he was tied up.Luckly the boy rememmbered where they were going.It was half a mile.Finnally the kidnappers got to the safehouse with the boy.It was 9.00 pm at night.They left a knife on the floor.The boy picked up the knife and took it up to his hands.He cut the rope so it got loose and he got out of the tied rope.Then he ran back to the camping area.His parents were very happy to see him.
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3 comments:
good narrative writing
Rawiri
Dear mrs fischer thank you for teaching me to spell me the wors.By Finau
you got 3 mistakes but it's still thrilling.
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