Sunday, May 10, 2009

The Book Parade by Kaloni

On Friday after big play team 3 came and got changed into our costumes because we had a book parade . When I finished wearing my costume I opened the door and when I saw some people, they looked beautiful. After that I got out of the room I felt the air and it was fresh. The chair I sat on was comfortable. When one of the classes were walking they were looking cool and then the other classes had their turn annd they looked cool too. We were very last and I felt boring because I hate it when we are last.
Finally it was our turn but when it was our turn I felt very scared and creepy. So when every body had their turn ,all the team three children walked around the school with our teacher. So we walked around team one and team two, and five then we went down to team four and then we went back to team three. When we were walking I felt really shy. Before we were walking around team three children so we can show them our costumes. Then the teacher had to pick four people and I wasn't it. It was good she didn't pick me because I don't like to be picked for something. Then they walked around the school and they said it is wonderful walking around the school. Then we came back to team three and got changed into our uniforms. When we came back it felt brilliant for me but the other girls did not want the parade to finish. I liked Viginia's dress because it looked beautiful!. Then I went back to class and then all of a sudden I felt happy. Then the bell rang and it was loud! So then we got our bags and Rosalie came and got our jerseys and hats so we can be organized. Then we finally could go home tired. The parade was awsome!. I liked Mrs Fischer's costume because she dressed up as a pirate. She looked funny and cool I had a beautiful time at the parade.

3 comments:

Anonymous said...

WOW that is a long story Kaloni

Anonymous said...

KALONI you had one spelling mistake it was and you wrote it like this annd but its o.k. your work is mavellous.

Unknown said...

great work what a mavellous story I have just read.