Saturday, November 15, 2008
The Race by Virginia
Last Thursday it was the cross country race. I was in the year 4 girls' running team. I liked it when we got stuck in the mud. It was gooey . I didn't get a place but I was proud of myself that I had fun. I just think to myself that it is not about winning . Its about having fun. If you come in a place then you worked hard and succeed. Even though I didn't get a place I sure did have fun. I liked it when Mrs Cater squirted us with the hose. I got squirted and I was laughing. I saw many parents on the benches watching us run. There were some big people who helped us with the cross country. I was puffed when I passed the office. I didn't make it in the race. I came 5th or 6th. I liked the cross country because it was funny. I saw two big boys running. They were all wet but they didn't look puffed either. Corrissa won the year 4 girls' race. Someone told me that Corrissa won and that she also last year as well. Although I didn't win I did better and I got better at running and at my old school we had a race and I was in the 8th place so I think I've gotten better. SRS is the best school I've been to because they have the best rules to keep us safe and have fun. I feel really safe in this school and I also have fun, especially the cross country and the other fun trips. I had fun at the cross country . It was a brilliant day.
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5 comments:
Virginia I just love your work. I was thining how much time it would have took you to write & it was honourable too.
amazing story Virginia.I liked the paart when you said its not about winning its about having fun.I liked the intresting words you've used.
Great long story
hi virginia great story you like the race.
fabulous work
Im so proud of you Virginia
Good Job!
MUM
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