Saturday, October 18, 2008

The Holidays by Tremayne

In the holidays I helped my Mum to do things like get bread milk and milk.  I went to the shoops and she said get three drinks for us.  I biked home.  My dad helped me on the laptop.  Then it stopped and crashed.  We went outside to play. It was fantastic,  Me and my friend went to his house to play on our bikes.   Then it was home time.  I said bye.  I had dinner, it was delicious.

1 comment:

Anonymous said...

I like your story because it has good senceten and respectof mum.